Wednesday, January 15, 2014

Who Took My Breath Away........... Comments

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I owe my success to you
I am indebted on you,

On things lost I have no repentance
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Kavya .
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Geetha Jayakumar 30 January 2014

Beautiful poem Kavya....Beautiful flow of words so pleasant to read. Even the hindi translation is very good one. Loved reading both.

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Ameya Deshpande 28 January 2014

a very nice poem! like it very much

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Valerie Dohren 20 January 2014

Love that penultimate couplet too - deliciously romantic.

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Om Chawla 17 January 2014

Lovely romantic write. Enjoyed reading it. The hindi version is equally authentic and does not sound as a translation of original thoughts.

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Valsa George 16 January 2014

Your gentle and soft touch Takes my breath away, Such romantic fervency! May you never lose his supportand let him be around to understand and interpret your moods, Kavya! Enjoyed! !

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Dinesan Madathil 16 January 2014

A strong and highly charged poem.. The translation can be later verified in GOOGLE TRANSLATOR whenever you attempt the same.

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Lalitha iyer 15 January 2014

Good, nice expressions

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