Sunday, September 27, 2015

Who The Fool Is Watching The Moon At Skies Comments

Rating: 5.0

Full moon was shining on the sky,
your hand in my hand, so close were we,
I was in you, you were in me,
and I was then in a mood to fly.
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M Asim Nehal 28 September 2015

A smile on my face after reading your poem, Lol....Nice poem. I enjoyed it 10++++

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Kelly Kurt 27 September 2015

I am not the romantic like you my friend. If the clouds are merciful, I will watch tonight's total eclipse. I suppose if a beautiful woman was with me under the sky, I would show her some attention too.: -)

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Jaishree Nair 27 September 2015

The romantic pair enjoying the late monsoon wind under the moonlight. Well envisioned .enjoyed reading .thanks for shatino

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Khalida Bano Ali 27 September 2015

What nice imagery, what a lovely poem......................................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2015

Full moon shines in sky and hand to hand we keep on and watch. While cloud covers sky we do not able to see moon but it too does not become deep night. Weather plays nice and real romance in such wonderful imagery as described her. Very wisely drafted and shared....10

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