Saturday, October 10, 2020

Who Stole My Dreams, Who Did This Mischief? Comments

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Who stole my dreams, who did this mischief?
Now I don't even sleep at night,
neither the moon attracts me.
This was my property, this was my treasure
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M. Asim Nehal
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Brutry Brara 11 October 2020

Yes dreams r real treasure.

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Varsha M 11 October 2020

Robbed of your alien dream Lay you there in disgust Don't worry dreams are faithful They never accompany strangers Down to you only will it come again For its your dream, your creation.....good poetry about robbery.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 October 2020

Lost dreams! ! ! ! ! Still moving on. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Shreya Hacks 11 October 2020

For long time I am also not getting the dreams

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Yousha Nikul 11 October 2020

Who can restore other than you.

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Deepak S S 10 October 2020

They are super robbers. Politics is what they do will misguide and rob your dreams so beware.

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Darren Jkoeryo 10 October 2020

DJ is against such robbing. Sleep well and write about the dreams.

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T Rajan Evol 10 October 2020

They can't rob you of your dreams.

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T Rajan Evol 10 October 2020

High philosophy of life people started robbing dreams. Sich a masterpiece

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Zoyza Da Vinka 10 October 2020

Positive poem. Hoped that someday they will return to me, To take me again on a mysterious journey by nights.

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Mamta S 10 October 2020

Dreams are guiding source without them we are directionless. Nice poem.

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Poetic Sky 10 October 2020

Interesting poem. Who stole my dreams, who did this mischief?

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Ricky Manhatten 10 October 2020

A hopeful poem, inspiring and philosophical. Full points

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L Milton Hankins 10 October 2020

Such a fine poem with lots of imagery and an unfortunately event. Keep writing.

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