Friday, August 19, 2016

Who Sings That Song? Comments

Rating: 4.4

In the wee hours of dawn,
A melodic song alarm
Sweetly guides and leads me on
With a strange and sweet charm
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Yasmin Khan
COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 25 January 2019

Melodious crooning at the wee hours of the morning by this songster of nature has brought out such a wonderful piece of poetry from the poetess' pen! Congratulations, Yasmeen Khan, on such a brilliant piece! Quite worthy to be a 'Member Poem of the Day' on any of the days of the calendar. I hope PH bosses will take note of my comment and publish it as a MPOD soon.

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Yasmin 11 February 2019

My kind thanks for your response

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Abduhoo Salamath 27 August 2016

woow.. beautifaul poem (song) wonderful// Thanks for sharing

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Akhtar Jawad 24 August 2016

Apparently a song by a bird, but I like metaphors, so I take this poem as an alarming infant singing to wake her mother, to help her, to feed her and to love and muse her.

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Yasmin Khan 25 August 2016

Thank you, a poem can be interpreted in many ways.

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Valsa George 20 August 2016

In the early hours of morning when there is a kind of subdued silence, the song of this bird must be ringing loud and clear filling the hearts with a divine melody..... at once soothing and enjoyable! These songsters of Nature are so sweet to be heard and so mesmerizing to be seen! Lovely write Yasmeen!

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Yasmin Khan 25 August 2016

Thank you Valsa Ma'am, it's nice to read your words after a long time. The songbird has her nest in nearby trees and often amuses me with her song singing hidden in leaves.

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Nosheen Irfan 19 August 2016

What a beautiful piece of poetry! A lovely morning filled with bird's crooning. Calming n soothing write that goes straight to heart's depths. Deft use of vocabulary. Great expression. Thank u for sharing.

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Yasmin Khan 20 August 2016

Thank you kindly, Nosheen Irfan, your beautiful words made my day.

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