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I like this poem. This sounds like it relates to what developed countries would call the third - world. I have not experienced this personally as I do not live in these locations. But I still feel sorry and do whatever I can to help these people. I like how you wrote it! Well done.

'clothing, food, shelter and education' The carrots that we follow to our end...as we lose to the master Winning we celebrate with every food we eat, every cloth we wear If and only if we are not the victims Good poem