Sunday, January 4, 2009

Who's That Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who's that girl?
Who kept wondering
When will Singapore finally snow
Or if a purple sky will make,
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Rashidah Rahman
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Abduhoo Salamath 14 August 2016

great, ..really very great....

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Evaughn Gray 21 January 2009

this poem is very good, i love all of your poetry so far.. and i'm pretty sure i'll love the rest of them also. :) ans i also do agree wtih Richard here.. i do love the structure and how you started out each stanza with 'Who's that girl'.. it was just beautiful. ~Hazel G.E

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Mrs.Joseph =) 15 January 2009

thats really good! Keep writing

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Amber Green 07 January 2009

I loved this one. It seems to me to be the realization of a childhood long lost. Great flow to it.

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Sue Ann Simar 04 January 2009

This is sweet and had a nice flow - and a likeable girl -.

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