Who's That Girl Comments

great, ..really very great....

this poem is very good, i love all of your poetry so far.. and i'm pretty sure i'll love the rest of them also. :) ans i also do agree wtih Richard here.. i do love the structure and how you started out each stanza with 'Who's that girl'.. it was just beautiful. ~Hazel G.E

thats really good! Keep writing

I loved this one. It seems to me to be the realization of a childhood long lost. Great flow to it.

This is sweet and had a nice flow - and a likeable girl -.