Sunday, April 9, 2006

Who Protects Me From You? Comments

Rating: 2.8

As you weild your cutlass
You smirk, you grip the handle
Slashing through emotions
My bones are cracked, to even the marrow
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Reginald Goodridge
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Faith Elizabeth Brigham 09 April 2006

wonderfully written...a fine poem!

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***** ********* 09 April 2006

Your poem acutely describes the hardest thing to avoid in cyber love Reginald, not cutting each other to pieces in the clashes of heavenly thunder that these misunderstood relationships inevitably create. You must remember that people often do not mean what they say in anger, it does not stop the hurt, but maybe it makes it less. 10 from Tai

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Reginald Goodridge

Reginald Goodridge

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