Wednesday, January 7, 2009

Who Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

the one in the corner who no one sees
the one who always says please
the one who never gets asked
the one in the corner a smile for a mask
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John Mccudden
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A.M.WOOD meme 17 January 2009

Hi John i have read all of ur poems but this one is my favourite very emotive. keep up the excellent wrighting xx

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Carolyn Brunelle 15 January 2009

a perfect picture of an introvert in my book. I can totally relate.................we take everything in but don't necessarily feel a need to be seen or be center stage. Nicely put John!

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Kaitlyns Mummy 13 January 2009

i really like this poem. very interesting and thought provoking!

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Nikia Chesney 12 January 2009

This is a really great piece. I can relate to this poem, and that's a sure way to get people to like your work, is to write about something they can relate to.

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Amanda Cook 12 January 2009

This is well written. I like it a lot!

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