Who'Ll Be There? Comments

I often wonder this myself. I am sure all that are important will be so. Written elegantly and leaves one pondering Who'll Be There?

This is brilliant- you can exress your raw emotions into poetry which makes the reader truly connect with the poem. A great poem, which asks us what man has asked for centuries, who will be there when we need them the most. Good write

Oh, so lovely to read your poem, here as: I’m one of the members who hold your hands. All those who love you are standing by. We all are those who like to hear your voices. I am treating you as one of my teachers.

You have so many ideas and a beautiful way with words.Your poetry is a true American treasure and a real pleasure to read.As always a gift of many stars.Thank you for writing these wonderful poems.

your work makes wonderful reading y'know, thanks for sharing it!

This poem is superb it is a very delightful read and deserving of a 10+... I

How do you do this? Your poems have perfect rhythm and rhyme. ~ Sara

if your beloved cannot be there with you... rest assured, an angel will be there :) Very deep poem, very much on many peoples minds - especially in these challenging days, thank you for writing what many dare not think, let alone speak....

u made me speechless...the words, the feelings, the flow, and the writing style are perfect...i wish i can write something like this....

I liked the restrained emotion that was beautifully expressed, because here the poet is talking about going (death) and a death-bed scene. In spite of it, there is a halo of light around this one!

This is a great piece GW, ...If its truly your heart they want, believe....they'll be there........great piece..'10' Best wishes Wolfy Jon

This one has come out really well for everyone to understand the theme of the poem.Poet seeks to know the lovers intention.sure she will come before you go..............good one my 10+

Even death easily If you are waited by the favourite.... Best wishes Tsita

enjoyable poem nice flow

this was a lovely piece, not scared of death but rather dieing alone. I loved it and the flow was perfect, fun to read thro!

The whole world is full of my kith and kin to oblige and take care! Have faith in god, self and the people around!

You should listen to the Country singer George Jones 'He Stopped Loving Her Today.' You may find the answer in that song!

This was a painful piece for me to read...because it reflects a situation that I know too well... Skillfully written Wolfey! Hugs, Dee

… We since a birth come nearer to this hour … but seldom we recollect about it … thanks …

This poem, once again, well expressed. It touches on a subject many face when they are sick or at the end of their lifetime. This, another 10. Thank you...keep writing.