Who Let Them In? Comments

A great metaphysical poem that will for ever live in poetic history.

I like the menace in this......and the repetition.... One to many 'who's' in the first stanza? Rx

Mystery and a hint of menace weave in and out of this fascinating poem about self and other and choice and control. The poem works beautifully with its sing-song repetition and its lyrical phrasing. Fine work, Reshma. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

we wish to sing... The candles burning bright, The melancholy mournful sighs, The mascara on my lashes, It was they who let them in.

a deep mesmerising poem

WELL WRITTEN. U GET 10++......................

is it a hallucination or the devil inside, working in mysterious uncontrollable ways! a concept very intriguing!

A fantastic poem. Gr8 thoughts. A gr8 gift of poetry is that u can even give satisfaction to people in your sorrow. Thank you very much.

A good naration. I am not sure who could it be to all thoes things done through you. It is good to read

I liked this soliloquy. Very few of us have the time for such dialogues with ourselves. Lord Krishana also says so in Gita: The Bhagvad Gita says: (This being is neither pierced by the weapons, nor burnt by the fire, nor made damp by the water, nor dried up by the wind.)

nice one, , i got scared reshma, , , , a 10 surely

my shadow mourn for my body RJHHTKHG

real eerie....luvd it...the usage of words r excusite..

wonderful! keep writing!