Tuesday, August 26, 2008

Who Knew? Comments

Rating: 3.5

Who can know the troubles of your heart,
Or why you smile your broken smile.
Who knows where to start
With a shattered heart living in denial.
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Aaron Priestly
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Tanya Stanford 09 September 2008

This made me realize people are very much the same as each other. One does not know how someone else truly lives. Very good.

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Krystal Alley 07 September 2008

this poem is very very well written, i like it a lot, and 'who knew', is the perfect title for this poem...keep writing, and by the way, look at my poem, 'you say you love my....'.......my friends from the outside world(which means my friends that are not from poemhunter) really love this poem.. thx

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 September 2008

I am always interested in titles and how they relate to the poems. It appears that this title is a little off course in that regard. The story line is OK, but readers want to see some kind of changes occur during the poem. This onejust asks questions and no real answers emerge. GW62

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Tanya Stanford 28 August 2008

Sadly the only one to do this is yourself. Waiting for someone else might come to late. Lovely Use of words and felt the emotions.

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