Thursday, March 23, 2017

Who Kissed Who Was Kissed Comments

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The strife that was leading us towards separation,
But the flower of love in her lovely arms,
Stretched her hands towards me and said first time,
'Pa! ', and smiled to calm down the storms.
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 March 2017

A most beautiful relationship - Father -daughter - pure and most endearing. Loved the way you have narrated it. Then I turned my face and got what I had missed, Difficult to decide who kissed and who was kissed! Touches the core of the heart. Full 10

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Rajnish Manga 24 March 2017

Our network of relationships in the family sustains itself through the bonds of pure love. Emotions delicately captured and portrayed. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2017

Flower of love shines in lovely arms of time. Difficulty may arise in mind to express this but kiss of time remains in memory. Wonderful poem is shared with wonderful views...10

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