Friday, October 13, 2006

Who Is Your Wife? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who is your wife
In this starless life?
Will she bring a smile
Or a dowry of heartbreak and strife?
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Uriah Hamilton
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Dee Daffodil 09 February 2007

This one is very touching. Hugs, Dee

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Ebone' Ingram 25 November 2006

amen to that one. but if all else fails...at least you can write well. eni da kid

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Sandra Fowler 13 October 2006

A very sad poem, but your fine talent never forsakes you. Take care, Uriah. Kindest regards, Sandra

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John Kay 13 October 2006

Good, honest feeling here. I like it. John

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 13 October 2006

LAMENTIVE VERSE...IN THE END, ALBEIT, TIS EASY FOR ME TO SAY BEHIND MY PC....I HAVE WITNESSED THE BEASTS WORK & GOD'S WORK...I DON'T THINK ITS SO MUCH A CASE OF GOD LETTING US DOWN AS MUCH AS OUR UNCONSCIOUS ALLOWING US TO LET OUR GUARD DOWN & GET BURNED BY THE BEAST....AND THEN OF COURSE WHAT DO WE SAY? THE DEVIL GOT ME....OR WHERE WERE YOU GOD? HEY, IM JUST RAMBLIN' A WEE 2 MUCH...BOTTOM LINE...YOU ARE A FINE WRITER, A GOOD MAN & THIS IS A FINE POEM! ''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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