Thursday, October 12, 2006

Who Is This One? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who is this one who calls my name?
And always sets my soul aflame,
Who's this one I can't forget?
I've loved since the day we met?
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Vallerie Lobell
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James B. Earley 27 June 2008

An excellent composition to the favored one!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 April 2008

yet it is the flame that burns within the stance when bestirred by the love still the yearning by desire when crooning................yet luscious green, blazing the glory of love wishful, romance ripples by the heart, wellpenned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Michael Fischer 06 May 2007

Beautiful poem...well written and good use of language. Thanks for sharing your art! Top marks! -Michael

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Duncan Wyllie 28 October 2006

I like many of your titles and this one is no exception, well done, something old-english about it Love duncan XX

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