Who Is This Girl I Have Met Comments

it's fine what ur doing for her...I know she's not me but u have to let her do something or then it sounds like she nothing or perhaps a robot

mmm... lovely poem. i think this is my fav. xoxox

when i read this poem. i feel like your really in love. and you would do anything for that girl. beautiful. x3 mill

I liked the repetition, but I thought the lines chosen were not the most enticing for the reader.So I gave it a seven. I could be wrong on this one. It's just how I feel. GW62

beautiful. lovely piece.