Thursday, May 10, 2018

Who Is This Beautiful Girl Comments

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Is she a mother?
No, she is taking care of a younger child,
but she is not a mother.
Is she a friend?
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 May 2018

lovely imagery and a beautiful lesson contained there in

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A very lovely poem that shows appreciation to elder sisters. Yes, elder sisters usually take the place of a mother when the latter is away. A great piece well penned.10

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Mj Lemon 11 May 2018

A wonderful tribute to elder sisters! A great verse, Akhtar.

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Rini Shibu 11 May 2018

Elder sisters are very caring..wonderful poem Thanks for sharing

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Perdita Young 11 May 2018

An elder sister is a blessing of the family: a guarding angel of her younger siblings. A beautiful picture you have added here, Mr Jawad.

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she is the soul of friendship, she is incarnation of an Angel, she is an elder sister! Beautiful poem.

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Kelly Kurt 10 May 2018

She is a good human.

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