Who Is The Real Winner? Comments

a question to be answered by self.. coz it turns out that we unknowingly become a part of this never ending race and try to conquer it..actually in a sense this race itself is the sole reason that we humans are giving our best..but the unfortunate part is that we ourselves don't know what we are working towards..so a well asked question.. nice write! !

MAD RUSH FOR EVERYTHING FANTASTIC POEM AT SIXTEEN YOU ARE WRITING SUCH GOOD POEMS AND YOU WILL LEAVE US FAR BEHIND WITH YOUR THOUGHT SPEED -KAVIN CHARALAN

Are they really utilizing their mind? For this race they have to be very strong Because the race would go on for life long. I want to know what do they need? Is answer really the speed? very mature and core thinking.... pleasantly surprised...wow there... keep writing.. :) :)

Those who do not enter this life long race are the real winners! Excellent idea. A good poem. Due to some Google network problem, my comments to two of your poems are not displayed and sent. A very good Indian writer in English is in the offing! Cheers!

I really liked ur poem. I think nobody wins unless life has a good balance. Finding the balance is tricky! Expectations, desires, competition... The key is to not sacrifice what's important... Challenging as though this is

People are just too greedy, they never really know What they want. Fantastic poem.

Blame it on the sickening materialism in the world today.Everyone is in a rush to amass material things for themselves.Great poem.Deep penetrating philosophical insights.Girl you rock!

Nice rational poem.