Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Who Is That Strange Old Man? Comments

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I'm staring at this old man,
The old man's staring back,
His eyes are dull and misty,
His skin is weathered and slack,
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Clive Blake
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Valsa George 31 October 2014

Wonderful write! The suspense is held till the end! Then came the anti climax! Enjoyed this graphic description of the old man...... (Are you a descendant of William Blake? ........of course a compliment!)

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