I do want to live for another hundred years
Yet, I do know I have lived
I do want to make my mark, If only I could do so
I do want to fight my pain
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Brought tears to my eyes, such wonderful feelings of truth and reality. So many harmful changes are taking place. As usual the chieftains of the tribes play with human stupidity for their own gains and our demise. Magnificent last stanza: Who, . Just who, Is strong enough to change, To Change this world Is there anybody? I feel there is no one person there for the change we need. It has to be a collective effort and movement but a True One, maybe called Enough., We are not Fools Wonderful poem Lyn, says sooo much.
Yes to live in a world with peace we have to change. This who is not just you & me, we all at a time.......... very nice Lyn
sure we need a change, , a big question, would there be anybody to lead us, , , great message in your poem, ,
Thought provoking.. perhaps if only everyone would share peace and courage to change the world into a paradise...the concerted effort would make it possible....it should start with everyone..this CHANGE!
who? the one who is ready to embark upon this journey for the next 100 years....how strong and brave Lyn!
You..you are strong enough..loved this bright spirited poem :) inspired us with inspiring words_Soul
A heartfelt depiction has been made on environment and life vividly. Thevfollowing lines are most impreesive....... There is little time left Who Just Who Is strong enough to change To Change this world Is there anybody? Thanks for sharing this gem.10