Wake up; wake up soon dear sleeper,
Morning has arrived, sun has smiled,
Tell me who is inside on bed of laziness?
Who is snoring speedily? Who is sleeping?
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He..ha..ha..ha..this poem is very funny and I have enjoyed fun unlimited time. Laziness we should not have. We should improve a lot. Thank you.
This snoring poem is truly fun giving. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.
Early to bed and early to rise has been the dictum of elders! But the younger generation sit late in the nights and wake up very late! As a result they miss so much of the early dawn, the beauty of the rising sun, the early song of birds, the gentle breeze of the morning and more importantly the precious hours when one can be more productive. This poem is a beautiful reminder that each minute is precious! A 10
Beautiful poem teaching us the goodness of waking early in morning. No wonder it keeps one fresh and beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
God has send messenger to teach you, Father of heaven is watching you now. Freshness of morning and care of God I feel in your poem!
Your snoring poem is wonderful. I could not stop smiling more and more.