Saturday, November 15, 2014

Who Is She Comments

Rating: 5.0

A ten years old child,
Wrote a poem on a girl,
Described the curls,
Of her silky hairs,
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Amitava Sur 18 November 2014

A beautiful love poem with emotion and with a melancholic note. So sweet it is that touches heart.

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Amitava Sur 18 November 2014

A beautiful love poem with emotion and with a melancholic note. So sweet it is that touches heart.

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Salini Nair 18 November 2014

sir is this your story? anyway each line is coated with love....nice

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Heather Wilkins 15 November 2014

this is a beautiful but somewhat sad story well crafted I give this a 10+

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Khalida Bano Ali 15 November 2014

The boy lost the smile, With tearful eyes, She looked at the girl, When the eyes were met, She returned the tears, An amazing moment, When she appeared, A grownup eve. Amazing lines...............10

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