Tuesday, October 23, 2012

Who Is Problematic? Comments

Rating: 3.8

Do you think that my heart is made of metal,
For you to bang and put into the furnace and melt to mold,
The heart of same design customize to your desires,
To keep me as the loyal being just near your dirty heart?
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
COMMENTS
Dave Walker 24 October 2012

A great and powerful poem, great work.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 October 2012

Wow dat is pensive but a superb verbal protest in fine metaphor! I hope dis is just imagination.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 23 October 2012

a very powerful revolt! queen of Jansi

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