Wednesday, August 19, 2009

Who Is Our Enemy? Comments

Rating: 4.3

Satan and his colleagues
Making many many leagues
Pursue humans to create
A dubious, vicious debate
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akram saqib
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Chinedu Dike 07 October 2014

A well articulated piece written with insight. Satan is indeed the greatest enemy of man. Lovely. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2009

Divided men into nations Embossed a sense of pride On the human hearts dried.that's the great idea. hey are the one wrong feeling creators.... yes they should be ousted first from us...very good poem....10 read mineblood all over...go back.... you go back

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Shams Tahir 26 August 2009

it is the man not satan that is our enemy, he just incites us to do wrong, really great expression saqib

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Sarwar Chowdhury 22 August 2009

Bravo! ! another fine piece! 10+

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Surya . 19 August 2009

sure it is a satan, s job. but the angels are more. let us overpower the satans. nice poem voted10 surya

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