Tuesday, September 15, 2015

Who Is Not Sad Comments

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Why the moon is so much grieved?
Moon light seems absent minded,
How much the stars are restless!
A silence is ruling the leaves,
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Muhammad Ali 17 September 2015

How much the expressions of the great outer world are dependenton one's innerself. Nice poem

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Valsa George 16 September 2015

Our state of mind will be reflected in the surroundings. If we are joyful, everything around will be seen in a glorious light. On the other hand, if we feel low and sad, Nature and all objects in it will have a dark and desolate look! The image of the sad lover waiting for his love is effectively brought out!

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Amitava Sur 16 September 2015

A right title as Who is not sad . Yes every human being on this earth is ultimately sad. Because none can satisfy his or her goal or wish which is never ending or ever increasing.

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Kelly Kurt 16 September 2015

Your wording is marvelous. I love the style.

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Sanjukta Nag 15 September 2015

Night is a passing show! Awesome expression. Very heart felt poem revealing the state of mind of a lover and how his morose mind spilling sadness to his surroundings.

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Khalid Saifullah 15 September 2015

Sweet and beautiful..............................................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 September 2015

I am not waiting for her! How can I say, not waiting for her..........wonderful depiction in wonderful speculation. Thanks.....10

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M Asim Nehal 15 September 2015

Wonderful imagery, when we are sad we see everything around us sharing the same feeling, when we are happy we see the happiness around us..........Very well thought and written........10++++

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