Tuesday, April 30, 2013

Who Is Mother? ? Part 2 Comments

Rating: 3.8

Who is mother? ?
The second name of God
A very sacred relation
An embodiment of patience
...
Read full text

Hira Akhtar
COMMENTS
Jazib Kamalvi 20 April 2017

No doubt the mother great. Thanks.

0 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad 24 May 2014

In many mythologies God is described as mother, for the reason that God creates. a nice poem.

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 24 August 2013

i love this: A shadowy tree In a hot day A warm blanket In a chilled night these two lines need work: The one who undersatnds That her child wants ...ask me if you want to The one who is a shelter For the torture and trouble From the people of the world....i'll only say look carefully and tell me if this is what you wanted to write. Hira, you may never be able to explain mother, but you have done a splendid job describing a fantastic one. i don't know which i like better, part 1 or part 2. they are both great. tfs (thanks for sharing) , bri

0 0 Reply
Shahzia Batool 03 May 2013

yes, ink will be dried...! ! !

0 0 Reply
Hira Akhtar

Hira Akhtar

Gujrat
Close
Error Success