$who Is Making So Much Noise... Comments

a frustating noice...the voice of the subconcious mind...another frightening dream with in a happy dream, the life...10

I fully sympathise, This noise pollution gets me too! Below my study room the old ladies are performing kirtan right now! Perhaps for my salvation, which I have yet to realise! - Raj Nandy

a nice poem. shows the importance of Prayers. well done.

ha! ha! good one..............

Internalising our fears and concerns can bring much unrest & angst into our most quiet moments...such as bedtime....thus, we dream...surereal, and crypticly....as we attempt to work out our conscious concerns before daybreak....And that rarely happens...However, sometimes that unrest (as you so accurately described, in this fine piece of work) is enough to make us take a hard look at what we can do differenly, that will result in our minds achieving silent peace, 'fore we lay our minds down for the night.As always, Solid Penning, Mamta! F j R ````````

the unrest we feel as a human body in this age is well reflected in your peom...even in sleep we suffer.excellent.

This happens almost to all I feel. A good awakening by this poem of our inner sufferings we don't often share with others.