Saturday, March 14, 2009

Who Is He? Comments

Rating: 5.0

who is he who gives me light in the darkness?
who is he who simplifies my work?
who is he who gives me comfort?
who is he who is better than the best?
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Pranav Kumar
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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 October 2009

It is a good thing that you have realized God in this young age itself.

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 29 July 2009

Bless you.....................

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Surya . 28 July 2009

yeah.right anawer.full 10 for you surya

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C. P. Sharma 28 July 2009

Very good. But you are too mature for your age. CP

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 18 April 2009

yes he is better than the best..................your god........my god......our god................

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Jack Price 25 March 2009

This is good work. Keep writing like this and it will have other poets and readers coming to your page to read your poems.

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Indira Babbellapati 23 March 2009

ur lil mind does think BBIIGG! !

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Raj Nandy 22 March 2009

A good thought well expressed! Keep writing with HIS help! -Raj Nandy

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 21 March 2009

Dear Pranav, Out of your three couplets this one is better. Carry on. Practice more You have the feeling in you. someday it will flow automatically. Thanks Rajkumar -7

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Zachary Clark 16 March 2009

I like this I was gonna write something like this then thought against it now I wish I would've.

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Oluko George 16 March 2009

Too young yet talented.You have employed styles in your poem hence it is good! repetition, rhetorical questions...etc.Continue with the same spirit you will be great.

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Dream Catcher 15 March 2009

A very innocent and appealing poem.Write more...

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