Who Is He? Comments
who is he who gives me light in the darkness?
who is he who simplifies my work?
who is he who gives me comfort?
who is he who is better than the best?
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yes he is better than the best..................your god........my god......our god................
This is good work. Keep writing like this and it will have other poets and readers coming to your page to read your poems.
A good thought well expressed! Keep writing with HIS help! -Raj Nandy
Dear Pranav, Out of your three couplets this one is better. Carry on. Practice more You have the feeling in you. someday it will flow automatically. Thanks Rajkumar -7
I like this I was gonna write something like this then thought against it now I wish I would've.
Too young yet talented.You have employed styles in your poem hence it is good! repetition, rhetorical questions...etc.Continue with the same spirit you will be great.
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7/27/2025 10:54:33 AM # 1.0.0
It is a good thing that you have realized God in this young age itself.