Who Is God? Comments

Your observation is remarkable and more remarkable is depiction of same. God is like our father who has lost his children.................or the children have lost their father, and the ending 'we just want more and more'.............there is no end to this more.

I know who God is....................................

GOOD POEM SHWETA THEY THINK GOD IS BOON GIVING MACHINE -KAVIN CHARALAN

God is those who are bread to hungry// A great poem! ! !

I take it that 'beating the bells' is a Hindu tradition to appease the gods when asking for things - and you've noticed the greediness / shallowness of some poeple? ' They want to live life in honey' - do you mean, 'they want to live a life of bread and honey? ' - nice poem, good observation, great idea and covers a pleasantly deep subject for a 16 yr old - Keep writing!

If their prayers are not answered positively, people blame God and ask the cause. Realistic portrayal. Well written poem. What is life? is excellent. I think the comments I typed are not conveyed to you. That poem deserves top scores. Cheers!

I take it some people beat the bells in Hindu temples in order to please the gods and hope to receive power and wealth in returm for their symbolic gesture? Nice poem - Not sure of the meaning of the line 'want their feelings to be preserved'? 'They want to live life in honey' - do you mean 'they want to live a life of bread and honey? Nice poem - good idea - keep writing

Again a beautiful flow, fantastic work

Nice spiritual poem. God is Love & Love is God.

Thats a great topic, you know :)