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hello dear Mona! ! ! after a long time.... this is a nice write indeed.. very moving one indeed... really felt these lines.. keep expressing your self Mona.nice with lots of love shan

nice piece you become lost whilst reading it, very tender poem.

i use to let you tell me what to do, i don't know why, maybe because at the time, i couldn't t......... from the starting itself the poem instills on the minds of readers a strong sense of emotions

Ummmmmmmm... FIne lines...Very good Description... I guess we all Lose ourselves somewhere along the way.... Nice reading....

The longer you wait, the more the trap closes. All you need do is decide.

mona get away from those kind i know of them dont fall for any im sorry be glad you got away good write

To me, this is new. I've never been in these shoes so all I can say is what this poem tells me. I see a girl, who's lost herself when she found a guy. She forget everything around her and the guy starts thinking for her, becoming almost controlling. Then as she finally starts to open her eyes, he finally seems to be trying for real, but she thinks he's faking tho she falls for it everytime. But, she's finally really seeing the real side of him. I hope the best comes to you, and you do what your heart desires. H&K's Jess**