Friday, February 3, 2012

Who I Am Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am someone who feels anger and hatred towards others that think high of themselves.
I am who I am and I am proud to be who I am. I am someone who has done wrong out of anger and paid for it and in return was left with a broken heart.
I am someone who appears to be kind but on the inside I am hurt and full of confusion.
I am someone who does not trust anyone and will not be there to put myself out and help when I have been shunned, to many times have I been lied to and treated like I was a clown.
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Sofia Kioroglou 07 March 2016

This one is great! Thank you for sharing with the world!

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Kevin Patrick 28 November 2012

I am A animal in war and in life and life is A war, I can be seen as A wolf, A wolf alone but close to others I feel safe with such as a pack. LOVE THIS LINE! a top write, with well nuanced versus and coordinated well done!

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Jessie Jett 23 March 2012

A very strong poem. As to, agreeing with others, making you vulnerable. A very true poem.

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Bella Hernandez 08 February 2012

Splendid! Deep meanings in every line... could feel the anger, hatred, outcast in this write very well written, and Glad that u r happy to be u ~Bella

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Aria Quimby 05 February 2012

I love it, poems like that are deep on another level, they make the writer vulnerable, I love it....so much feeling in the words. Bravo.

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