Who First Time Kissed Comments

Ecstatic charm has wonderfully motivated natural breath and beauty of hope and life. Moonlight has created a bright beam of face of perception. Pleasant weather has captured the petals of flowers. Such wonderful poem definitely deserves to be the poem of the day. A powerful imagery is witnessed in this poem. Always you have excellent idea in poetry composition....10

Many congratulations for such a beautiful piece of writing, which really deserves the POD title,

This is why we write; to put in words a feeling that may resonate with the reader. Akhtar, you are gifted!

It is not the girl or the boy, but nature that gives us the first feeling of love by making us aware to the beauty all around.Let me quote a few lines from this wonderful poem- - - - It were you who danced as the showers It were you who sprung into flowers, Neither birds nor beasts, nor a human, or a Jinn, It's none else, wasn't me, who committed this sin, - -Congratulations for Poem of the Day.

Here to revisit this wonderful poem that has been woven with beautiful words and lovely thoughts. Congratulations, Akhtar for Poem of the Day. Another laurel for your golden pen.

Interesting poem, congrats and thanks for sharing the poem with us

Here is a paradise he’ll may be at sky. Spring is what makes earth look as a lovely bride. Congratulations for a beautiful poem for member poem place.

In spring, a young man's heart turns to love.

Very sensuous poem about love and seduction..

Very nicely written. Congrats for the poem being selected as the POD. With best wishes.

Lovely poem. Expressions so pleasing to the heart and soul. The muse of good times distributing her bounties to the nature around and a few selected goodies to the blessed one. Thanks & Congrats, Akhtar Sahab. It were you who rained on the soil too dry Here is a paradise; may be at the sky, It were you who danced as the showers It were you who sprung into flowers,

Many congratulations for this amazing poem being selected as POD!

Congratulations Akhtar for Poem of the Day. I'm thinking of spring throughout your lovely write.

Very well crafted Akhtarji......Superb indeed.........deserving 10+++++++

a poem of naturalistic confessions perfectly sealed with a kiss? ................beautifully written Akhtar

Very beautiful poem sir Loved it It brought a smile on my face....

An excellent write. Second POD. You are certainly in favour. Good for you dear poet.

Beautifully crafted poem. Congrats on your POD.

CONGRATULATIONS! dear and revered Poet for the selection of POD. You deserve it soo well. rained on the soil, you who danced as the showers, you who sprung into flowers, simply beautiful dear Aktar.. tony

CONGRATULATIONS! This is nice to see your pretty poem as the Poem of the Day in member section. Dense clouds have kissed this sky of emotion and wind has kissed the sky. Nature's first kiss has valued more. Pleasant weather gives visible charm. This poem is an excellent poem well drafted with nice imagery...10