Who Do You Think You Are? ! ! Comments
True self covered with a veil,
such artificial behaviour on display,
brimming with arrogance and his eyebrows
frowned even if they have no reason to be so.
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The rendering is powerful and the diction is obviously superb.Improvement if any, has to be made in remoulding the prose into poetry here and there to streamline the format.
very fine, well done, I like it. Please read my poems and comment.
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7/19/2025 2:14:46 PM # 1.0.0
Beautiful way you have described the attitude of a person, at the same time what you feel for the person, is also presented well in this poem. Loved reading it.