Sunday, May 31, 2015

Who Do You Blame Comments

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Who do you blame
For the hands that steal
For the crack you live for
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Kelly Kurt 31 May 2015

I agree in essence with what you are trying to say but when you break any human problem down in terms of blame based on color or creed etc you minimize the truth that it is a human condition. No one group or subset, but human nature in general, and should be worked on together as a human race. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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Man Katt 04 June 2015

Wouldn't we all like for that to happen Kelly. I was expecting much more criticism. But I appreciated your comments. Make sure you let me have it next time :)

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Chinedu Dike 31 May 2015

Blacks a minority race in predominantly White society has come from long treacherous road - from Slavery to Freedom. Structural imbalances in the State still affect many, whose journey towards economic advancement are still fraught with stumbling blocks. However, those criminal elements that dent the image of Blacks must come to terms with the potential for evil that is contained in them. An insightfully penned piece of poetry, well articulated with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Man Katt 04 June 2015

criminal elements that dent the image of Blacks must come to terms with the potential for evil that is contained in them I don't think I have ever read a more elegant phrase than this. You are very wise Chinedu. Agreed. I appreciate your insightful comments and understanding in what I was trying to convey.

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Man Katt 04 June 2015

criminal elements that dent the image of Blacks must come to terms with the potential for evil that is contained in them I don't think I have read a more elegant phrase than this Chinedu. I agree. Thanks for you insightful comments and for understanding in what I was trying to convey.

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