Who Dares? Comments

Dude, this poem portrays the sad reality of unfortunate homeless childrens who are being abuse and being slave of poverty. The lines that breaks my heart the most is: 'Who dares the boy to cry, who cries himself to sleep each night, and cries every morning when he realizes he's still alive'. I love the way you write this poem. It seems to be an eye opener for us to see the suffering of this little children. This writting is so affective and persuasive that it made me symphatized and dare to care to that boy. So because I think this poem is not that brilliant, magnificient, incredible enough Im just giving it a 10++++