Wednesday, March 28, 2018

Who Cares? Comments

Rating: 5.0

As day follows night so begins a new dawn,
and starting anew there's a life that is born,
and lived for a while in the crook of your arm.
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Lodigiana Poetess
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 April 2018

A lovely poem dear Lodigiana. Life is a spiral movement, always oscillating through different positions, but the wavelengths change every time. 10++++++

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Tom Allport 07 April 2018

a very sad reality poem as night follows day we all cannot stay? .............well written LP

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Lodigiana 07 April 2018

Thank you so much Tom

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Chris Embrick 03 April 2018

You're never alone. We become young again in our poems. There's always someone older who needs a friend. This old rooster still got a good crow left. I can relate to this poem. I just wrote Acquitting Alice for those who can use a good laugh. Be blessed and write on.

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Lodigiana 03 April 2018

Your comments did make me laugh Chris..’This old rooster still got a good crow left’! ! I am loving the imagery there..I am off to read Acquitting Alice..I love a good laugh my friend..it is as good as having a portrait of Dorian Gray in the attic! ..and poetry certainly is ‘The best of times’ for us!

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 March 2018

As day follows night soon the caring is gone. The loves of your life have grown up or passed on. You're just treading water a tired, old mute swan...shattered hopes, reconciling oneself with the present situation and writing about it..... lovely poem dear poetess. tony

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Lodigiana Poetess 28 March 2018

Thank you so much for your very kind words Tony, which are very much appreciated.. Lodigiana x

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