Who Can Be Real Friend? Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Who Can Be Real Friend?

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Noble, simple and honest friend
Who can take you to logical end?
Never put you in shame and always offer
All help in time and opinion never differ

Not always agreeing yes in yes
Even criticism you may always face
Pay sometime price for having friendship
Never shed tears and but hide and weep

Consider problem as of his own
Friend’s problem never disown
Even at personal risk relation maintain
Danger, if any, keep off and contain

Insist on not doing anything wrong
Decline the offer but walk along
Thwart any move which may lead to fall
Show the correct path with timely call

Many may suggest to go in bar
Long highway race in speeding car
Such friends deserve complete bar
Real friend may remain always far

He, who is real friend, stands to loose
Still he remains and nice friends choose
It is his real vision and long sight
In the real crisis he will prove right

This is simple advice and call
You should think ahead and always recall
Past mistakes rectified in future’s plan
Keeping away bad friends with permanent ban

This will prevent you from landing in trouble,
Bad friends will disappear as water bubble
Real will stay at the end of the race
Problem, if any, may not run away and face

Friends are indeed life’s part and parcel
Bright at studies and in performance excel
I wish and pray for such friend circle
Life long friendship bond like magic and

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suwarna Patil 02 September 2009

Noble, simple and honest friend Who can take you to logical end? Never put you in shame and offer......10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 09 August 2009

A new definition is given in each line for the word 'friendship.' Karna was with Duryodhana knowing well he was on the wrong side, just because of his friendship

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Ritul Soni 02 August 2009

Noble, simple and honest friend Who can take you to logical end? he is indeed real..10

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Ratna Patel 30 July 2009

Noble, simple and honest friend Who can take you to logical end? who comes to your aid unconditionally...10

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Ketan Rajgor 30 July 2009

Noble, simple and honest friend Who can take you to logical end? who works or helps without any expectations...10

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Vijay Suwarnkar 09 October 2009

Noble, simple and honest friend Who can take you to logical end?

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Sachin Goswami 04 October 2009

Noble, simple and honest friend Who can take you to logical end? Never put you in shame and offer

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Sagarika Shah 03 October 2009

Consider own problem as mole Friend’s problems as mountain Even at risk relation maintain

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Rupa Shah 02 October 2009

Not always yes in yes Even criticism always face Pays price for having friendship Never shed tears and continue to weep

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 September 2009

‘Not always yes in yes…’ Yes I say yes to your this poetic yes. ‘Criticisms help to filer out inadequacies but unjust praise sure to out phrase. Ten Ms. Nivedita UK PS Invite you to read my poems with comments and or criticism Sir. niv

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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