Who Can Awaken The Sun? Comments

oh i love ur poems :) and there wonderful

If we can stand in that horizon, can awaken the sun.. A nice poem, ,

Dont ask us who wake up the sun...ask the horizon who bear when it rise..watching it everyday...the same which must be the same one put the sun on the bed at night..and only horizon got the answer..watch it everyday..In every night still you will see sign of sun in the face of moon...to deliver hope and dream never die even in dark...Nice write Ahmed Khaled! _Unwritten Soul

YES! YES! YES! Well conducted, Please Give Yourself Time, To Read Mine 'The Truth Hurts' Its very much about the sun, welldone

Good question, dear Ahmad. When sun's rays be tears When we lost our shadow When the sky and the earth cry When the desert's sand swallow our steps When the face of our dreams be dark Who can awaken the sun? To roll down The warm rays of the sun The shadows to be clear The laugh of earth and sky The way to our steps over the sand The face of our happy dreams No one. Only me and you Thanks dear Ahamd for your inspired words.

To chase after the sun, one leave shadows behind. You run and you run, only to find the sun coming up behind you again, bringing with it a new day, and new possibilities. Great poem. Thanks for getting me to read it...

simple, short and on point, weldone

It is a short poem but very well composed =)

This poem is magnificent, If any could awaken that of the sun it would be Ahmed! : D Beautiful poem, truly.