Who Can? Comments

A great philosophical write has been made here. No one can joyfully dance and sing when he is at the door of death. No one can feel gladness when he is in the cage although it is made of gold. But it is possible in case of superman. A brilliant poem is superbly executed with a great insightful theme. Visited time and again.

Wonderful imaginary and imagery! Beautiful poem with natural truth. I quote....Who can joyfully dance and sing When the bells of death do ring. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem.10

Songs of love! ! To keep us alive. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Wonderful imagery concerning a man and a superman. Thanks for the poem, Valsa ji. I quote a couple of beautiful lines: Who can sing a tune If the sun has set at noon

Qualitative questions in a high quality poem.

If you can’t, you are a man If otherwise, you are a superman! A thoughtful poem.

Superb words Valsa, realy well written truth

A truer word never said. Well done, a lovely poem.

Very true Valsa, we are but human and not superhuman. Well written.

Very true, we are all human tempted by the evil. but also drawn to the light. Interesting questions and comparisons add to the value of this poem. Nicely done.

This is really genial to lovers of truth, But all poets are dreamers.... this poetess but writes ''Who can stick to truth When Death threatens you like a brute If you can’t, you are a man If otherwise, you are a superman! ......''

A very inspirational poem in couplets of rhyme asking questions in each one. In the end comes the riddle solved! ! - If you can't: you are a man / If otherwise, you are a superman! Beauty at its best! Great, Valsa!

This your poem has given such well-defined parameters that any conscious reader can judge himself as a Man or a Superman...! ! !

'man and superman', , , lovely and thought provoking definition :) thanx