You fascinated me at first sight.
Your face's perfect. Your scent's so fine.
You hypnotized me at first sight.
You tempt my heart. You charm my mind.
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Welcome to PH young lady and a fine start, a good poem and don't worry time will help you in your grasp of English 10 Daniel
This one is good! Pls. continue writing... That's a gift you should treasure! There is always room for improvement. Don't worry, as time goes by, for sure you'll learn a lot...Just remain being a poet. God bless you! -Pink Butterfly-
thanks for commenting on mine...