Who Are You? Comments

Mystery unresolved. Brilliantly written poem Now come out of your veil For how long you will keep hiding The moon has come out piercing the clouds Why not show your presence. Who are you?

There is heartbreak, dilemma, fear and anxiety. But we hope nothing can hamper to lovable life. Moon has come outside to show face and beautify your way. Calmness is reflected and lover is felt. The veil is opened up and tenderness is expressed. This poem is wonderfully penned with much beauty....10

Sometimes too many questions are worthwhile asking. Good poem.

Both the versions are fantastic, great to read two versions from you,10

Some questions are pertinent and I quote: Dreams have ignited some urge now Aroused the sleeping giant within I am afraid of the flood, What if they break free, Who are you?

Awesome question who are you? At times we are lost in our thoughts and imaginations and fail to understand who we are and who the other fellow is. I see a philosophical touch in this poem, many question we can relate to our CREATOR though we see his sings but we cannot see him in any form due to our own limitations. Thought provoking poem.10 plus for this poem.