Monday, September 17, 2018

Who Are You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who are you?
Are you my inner voice
Constantly prodding
Me to smile and
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Bharati Nayak
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Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2019

Sunshine love! ! You are my feeling, Able to smile. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 10 February 2019

Thank you Edward Kofi Louis for your beautiful comment.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 January 2019

A brilliant poem, Who Are You, You are the sky When I look for hope And in the time of despair You are the earth To hold my feet. And towards the end you talk about you, the soul, in the fashion of Kena Upanishad, Excellent.

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Glen Kappy 26 September 2018

Hi, Bharati! What you say here makes me think of how God’s spirit speaks to our spirits which reside, as we often describe them, in our hearts, in the center of us. Spirit speaks to spirit. Jesus promised that he and God would make their home in those who obeyed the command to love. -Glen

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Bharati Nayak 26 September 2018

Thank you Glen Kappy for reading and giving your valuable comment on my poems.I like what you said- -Jesus promised that he and God would make their home in those who obeyed the command to love

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Kishore Kumar Das 26 September 2018

Even the lifetime is not sufficient to define, who are you. Your meaningful poem has made a courageous attempt to delve into this philosophy...thank you for sharing this lovely poem...

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Bharati Nayak 26 September 2018

It is nice to see your comment after a long time.Thank you for your insightful comment.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 September 2018

God is the inner voice of any and every soul without that inner voice nothing would exist neither i nor you but why to all my poems you have said adieu wish my inner voice knew..the beauty of GOD'S EXISTENCE is immense for each one me and you without a GOD what would humans do none has the power to so claim why an unknown unseen yet living god in human mind make one go insane who is to blame God s EXISTENCE is a MUST

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Bharati Nayak 26 September 2018

Thank you Poet for your kind words on my poems.As you say, God is inner voice of each and every soul.I sometimes visit your poems, enjoy them, though might not have time to comment.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 September 2018

Like infinity anything that can be defined is not God, God is one who is only understood by a believing heart.

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Bharati Nayak 23 September 2018

Thank you Akhtar Jawadji for your kind appreciation.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 September 2018

Is this about the soul? Whatever it is it is wonderfully written in great meter and flow. Enjoyed this nice poem, keep writing. Kudos.

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Bharati Nayak 18 September 2018

Thank you so much S.zayab Kamoonpuri for your encouraging words.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 September 2018

You are my spirit/You are my soul/You are my feeling/You are my song..........sublime poetic expression! Your poems are very simple, sweet and highly expressive dear Bharati Apa. Top Score!

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Bharati Nayak 17 September 2018

Very often I doubt myself as a poet, but appreciation as yours from friends give me inspiration to write these simple poems.Thank you brother Dillip.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2018

You are neither your body Nor your voice You are neither smell nor touch You are something all above......here is the essence of the poem. So nicely, incisively and hauntingly you have inscribed this poem that it will attract the readers to read over and over again. This poem is going to my poem list. Thanks.10

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Bharati Nayak 17 September 2018

Thank you so so much revered poet Sri Kumaramani Mahakul for your appreciative words.

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