Sunday, June 12, 2016

Who Are You Comments

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I'm not lost in you,
in fact,
I have found myself in you,
sleeping carelessly,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Loke Kok Yee 15 June 2016

You are what others see in you! Thank you sir-10

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Nosheen Irfan 13 June 2016

You have beautifully put the feeling of being lost. But there is a lot of positivity as poet loses and finds himself at the same time. Great work.

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Kelly Kurt 12 June 2016

It can be both exciting and scary to be so lost.

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