Friday, August 10, 2012

Who Are You? Comments

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Who are you to give birth to me?
Who are you to list my rights?
Who are you to hit me?
Who are you to make me sleep at nights?
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Kemi Kemms
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Saadat Tahir 18 August 2012

You shine a jaundiced light on a derelict fiend pent up anger and energy..send forth in explosive packets.... on the face of it appears to be a monosyllabic monologue… dragging and spent in haughty indignation…says a lot and conveys a lot liked reading it ***

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 August 2012

queries ruffles in shadows of time quest meanders into answers untold heart defies to know stories by truth yet own psyche reels through all knowings, good write making reader to ponder for a while,10+=, thanks for sharing

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