Friday, January 13, 2012

Who Are You? Comments

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you stand by my door
i look at you
not seeing the person i know
who are you?
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Kelsi Brockway
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Lilian Chromious Eveson 15 January 2012

The your n the your a stranger this way is supposed to be 'you're' and there are some letters that are supposed to be capitalized. Keep on writing, there are some mistakes but just like they said, Mistakes can improve you. I hope you write more poems since this one is very beautiful, goodluck!

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Kelsi Brockway

Kelsi Brockway

Hornell, NY
Kelsi Brockway
Kelsi Brockway
Hornell, NY
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