Monday, October 19, 2009

Who Am I? (Written In The Style Of Homer) Comments

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I have responded to this inquiry many times,
though I cannot immediately.
Where shall I begin? Perhaps the most perceptible? An accomplishment?
My educators have tested me to make me superior.
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Yuan Yuan Kelly
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Ciarán Kelly 25 October 2009

a beautiful depiction of Chinese culture, keep writing!

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John Shea 19 October 2009

Yuan, your poem is a ten and your destiny is what you choose it to be. I was touched by the quality of this literary work. The future belongs to you.You belong to the future you provide for yourself. Never give up on your dreams and aspirations.Life is so great to those who do wait. John

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