What you see is an ordinary girl, 
but don't let your eyes be fooled, 
My eyes shine like pearls, 
and of I am really cool
                
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sweet lover and great caller to whom you feel love with.. nice one.. keep on.. hazem al..
i say fine Job young one.... i love it.....
its a good topic but i think u should have spent more time and detail on urself
Well done rhythm...like the way you described ur self on the basketball court.....but u should've used more words to describe urself.....ill give u 8 for effort.

 
                     
                
aha....thats cool.....i play basketball too.... nicely written.... ;)