Saturday, February 9, 2019

Who Am I, Dear? Comments

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If this home by home-maker is made,
He mused on this existential dark:
Who am I, one that brings home mere bread?
The truth stared at him ever so stark!
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Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2019

Mind on thoughts! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 February 2019

Yes, Edward Louis, as a Greek philosopher said, 'We are, for, we think', and I'd add we are also what we think. So, when the husband asks, Who am I, you're right. Thank you.

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Susan Williams 09 February 2019

Thank you for adding the information in the Poet's Note- it was very helpful and informative to me!

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 February 2019

Thank you, Susan Williams if not for the poem, for the Poetic Note at least.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 February 2019

If voice works on words and life on breath we have think on spirit. A beautiful poem with wise theme is excellently presented.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 February 2019

Thank you, Kumarmani Mahakul, I appreciate that you've reached my poem so soon.

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