Who Am I And What Do I Seek? Comments

Unsettling changes keep occurring without stop. One constant thing is faith. That faith will carry one through to the end I believe. All changes beautifully recalled in the poem.

The search is on! It's but your saving grace That I seek. A great poem, man is still unaware as to who is he, so many learned men tried to define man but all of them could only understand themselves up to a certain extent.

A fathomless insightful quarry on life has been made in this poem marvelously. Beautiful poem I appreciate. Thanks for sharing.. 10

Who I am and what do I seek? and why I am bound to this who and what to do... great spells of time and space.. and we are dirt or wave or drop for some seconds of life and ages of ego. beautifully expressed poem and prayer and feelings

A beautiful poem (prayer) highlighting our journey of discovery through and within life.

This is one of the best poems you have written, Savita! At our age I can so well relate to this poem, the mind yearning for many things, but our fragile body refusing all commands! The unsettling changes within and without agitate us and what we wish for is the descending of occasional moments of stillness! I give this poem a high rating!

I was very very impressed by the progression of your thoughts and the vivid imagery that accompanied your philosophical and spiritual journey. Such philosophical explorations don't have to be dry and boring and you showed the rest of us how it can and should be done! ! ! ! How many forces are at work Were at work, will be at work And for how long! To make me for who I am! A time bound traveler In moving patterns of Universe I inch forward, is all that matters.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Fell in love with this stanza, it spoke so vividly and lucidly to the reader. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ for your skillful and poetic handling of this interesting topic.