Who Am I? Comments

Hi Kevia, I liked your poem 'who am I' very much. You prove you are a law unto yourself. The two lines which struck me most are: I am god's child and to thee i may not be; But to my father i am everything he made me to be. You indeed are god's child capable of reaching greater heights. Wish you all the best,

Strong and confident. Powerful poem.

You are 'Kevia', the one and only, and you will need to write a lot more poems before it is all over.