Who am I?
I don't know.
I'd give worlds to know
If that were possible.
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Each poem is closest personally constantly, we are individuals of a unique kind. No one poem is alike, I appreciate most this self discovery in these 47 lines of precious words added with the professionaly printed picture. One greatest Applause for YOU, dear Poet Clyde.
it is pretty a bit too long and u have been rated a 5 starrer you then know who you r poet do read my moms smiles ud like it
I know there are external Forces beyond my ken That mould me into a different Person than I was the day Before. If we metamorphose Each day then it's nearly Impossible to know. philosophizing about the perennial question who am I
" Know thyself" old Polonious Told his son Laertes. If we grope blindly through Life we will miss the star That makes our light shine./// beautiful and thoughtful poem penned; nice philosophy is appended thru the words- know thyself; I enjoyed.....5*******
'Life demands self knowledge If we are to live authentically, To own ourselves, to be able To answer the question " Who am I? ' - Loved these concluding lines. The poem gets 5 stars**** from me.
Thank you very much. You’re right. The closing verses are a “call to action” that’s this type of poetry should have, Khairul.
The poem leaves penetrating thoughts towards self discovery.
A creative and compelling piece of poetry written with insight. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.